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| Posted on 5/16/08 at 09:49 AM | |
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Hi, I didn't look at any of the other Post so I'm fresh from their opinions. I really like all of the art at the bottom. I'm sure this was technically challenging-but I think you may have gotten caught up in all that and missed some over all points. I'd mention tow things. 1, THe top large type is lost it's (attention getter factor) in all of that electrifying art. It's over kill in that area. Other than toning down all the pizzaz in the far background, I would decrease the pizzaz in/around the top type some how. Make it stand out. See your type at bottom far right for an example. Look how clean and understandable that area is. Why does that stand out so well? 2nd, All of that blue electricity …again is over kill. It's done well, but way too much. All you need is a couple larger, thicker streaks of electricity and that will do it. That will convey the electric horse power idea. It's not poor art or even poor design, just over done I think. trust me, I'm not saying that cause i think I do well at that. I don't. Thats why I know cuz, I'm speaking from exp. ____________________ Dot-Tone Dan / DOT-TONE – DESIGNS Artist specializing in the original…simulated process separation methods.  The Code of Fair Practice for the Graphic Communication Industry http://www.gag.org/about/fair_code.php http://www.templetons.com/brad/copymyths.html http://www.copyright.gov/ Why we can post sales in the artist forum. http://boards.screenprinters.net/viewthread/3/357295 | |
 
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